ext_110425 ([identity profile] maximvanziel.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] reviews_and_ramblings 2008-06-09 06:57 am (UTC)

I found this review a little different from your other reviews from first part.

Erotic stories sometimes are like a roaring fire, these instead are like simmering ashes, and maybe it is better, since a roaring fire blasts and ends in a blur, and instead the ashes last longer.

I know that you don't like so much non-HEA stories, but it's time to expand your field. You are changing, too, in good meaning.

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