reviews_and_ramblings | Check Ride by Nathan James

It's almost an impossible thing write a complete story in less than 35 pages, but Nathan James manages to do that in Check Ride.

Gilbert, Gil, is a 29 years old airplane pilot for a private company. He has the hots for Mario, an African American 32 years old fellow pilot. Mario is the wet dream of Gil, strong, handsome, skillful and gentle. When Mario asks Gil to accompanying him in a check fly of a newly renovated 727 boeing, Gil can't believe his lucky. And when, after a near deadly fly accident, Mario "comforts" Gil having mindless sex in the private bedroom of the Boeing, well, Gil is in heaven, and not since he is on air.

But the accident was not casual, and Mario and Gil need to face a nasty enemy. Waiting to confront the evil, they deepen the relationship exploring a bit of D/s plays: Gil sees fulfilled all his sexual dreams by a commanding Mario, who is more than happy to play the role of the Big Black Man for his "little" white captive. Not only the author planned a plot, but he even gave to the characters a background, arriving to hint some "youthful" complex in Gil.

All right, I hope that you "read" between my lines, and understand that I found this story more funny than other. I was true at the beginning, I'm really impressed by the ability of the author to write a complex plot in only 35 pages, packing a lot of scene, included two sex scenes involving once an hot tub and the other a shower plus a bit of hanging from the ceiling. The only thing that I didn't like is that, being a first point of view narration, Gil "feels" the necessity to speak in every moment, above all during sex, telling us when he is panting, slurping, sucking... well sometime it was a bit too much, it would be better if he remained in silence.

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