Riding The El At Midnight by Rick R. Reed

[reviews_and_ramblings]

Uhmm, I'm puzzled... what I have just read? really I don't know and I will try to say you enough to understand and not enough to spoil the story, that it's soo short, less than 25 pages, that it's an hard thing to do.

Mark is a whore or a slut... I don't understand if he does what he does for money or pleasure, or both. He is for sure an abuse son, and now he links pain with pleasure, love with rape. He is dressing for his night out, black leather and kinky toys in his backpack, long red hair and silver jewelry in all his body. He is searching the perfect man who will punish him for his wickedness.

Julio is a sadist. He is almost maniacal in preparing himself for the night, tightly dressed and perfect in every details, from the tip of his shoes to the tip of the silver blade he hiddens in his jacket. Handsome half German and half Cuban, he is searching for the perfect man to love and cherish.

When Julio sees Mark, he knows that he has not found the perfect man, instead he has found a filthy whore who deserves to be punish, but he doesn't know that Mark wants exactly that.

Well the setting is almost genial, the tension that builds during both Mark and Julio's waiting for the night it's like a time bomb ready to burst, I really don't find any complaint in the story if not in the end... what will happen next? Maybe my mind is not enought twisted to find the answer alone, and maybe this ending is exactly what this story needs.

http://www.amberquill.com/AmberAllure/RidingTheEl.html

Coming soon by Rick R. Reed:
Orientation, May 2008, from Amber Allure
Dead End Street, October 2008, from Amber Allure

Waiting Reading List:

http://www.librarything.com/catalog_bottom.php?tag=waiting+reading+list&view=elisa.rolle

Comments

[leeteng.livejournal.com]

Hmm I think I will skip. I like my stories with good old fashioned ending.

[elisa-rolle.livejournal.com]

Yes, it's very good, but for sure it hasn't an old fashioned HEA